feedback from shoot

After filming about 30% of my shots and i got some feedback from the class when i showed them, when i filmed i thought i caught more than 30% of my footage however some shots were not shot right and some were out of focus. My classmates told me that i needed to film more shots involving the 'boyfriend and girlfriend' together, that and i need to concentrate more on the mise en scene when it comes to what they are wearing.

Filming Session. (13/01/12)

On the 13th i planned to film about 50% of my film, at least 5 shots from each of the locations/themes. I rented out the theatre for the last hour of school and after school to film. I arranged with a music teacher in school to move a piano into the theatre, i also asked around and managed to find a smoke machine.

When filming, the smoke machine worked however the machine didn't want to work the entire time, it was an old machine and sometimes it was spitting out smoke when i didn't want it to. That has now made my job harder because i need to re film a majority of my shots again